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"Graveyard Tag"

submitted by Smedleys_Butler to SmedleysPorch 7 monthsOct 19, 2023 02:29:43 ago (+0/-1)     (SmedleysPorch)

Playing freeze tag in graveyards with imaginary friends

Cast out, pop these Skittles, work it out on my own
Know you care, know you miss me, shame won't answer the phone

Not rock bottom till
You smell lavas sulphur - then
Upside down heaven

In this sliver of tree line smoke refracts distant light
My only beauty beheld now, can't be surpassed by AI

Last good thing in my downfall has come to an end


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[ - ] Smedleys_Butler [op] 0 points 6 monthsOct 20, 2023 13:22:28 ago (+0/-0)

Id like to thank whoever downvoated this. Not my best work, nor was I in the mood, writing in the middle of the night. Still it follows a structure I created recently.

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