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Friend or Foe

submitted by TwistedC to PoetryForBrokenHearts 9 monthsAug 28, 2023 15:58:09 ago (+6/-0)     (PoetryForBrokenHearts)

Crazy Mad Life is Angry

God don't Love me

The Devil won't have me

Demonic voices in my head

All I Love is Dead

A Battle within

Me VS Sin

Shadow People Back Again

Friend or Foe

You See I got to know

Is that an Angel or a Demon

Looking through my Window


I wrote all this stuff like 15 years ago and I just found some of my old writings just looking back when I was in such a dark place helps me to not go there again.



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[ - ] lord_nougat 5 points 9 monthsAug 28, 2023 17:16:43 ago (+5/-0)

Roses are pink

Violets are violet

TOTAL NIGGER DEATH!!


Thank you, I'll be here all week.

[ - ] bosunmoon 2 points 9 monthsAug 28, 2023 16:58:26 ago (+2/-0)

That's a shitty poem.

"Do better.
Be better.
We better."
-bosunmoon

[ - ] TwistedC [op] 0 points 9 monthsAug 28, 2023 17:19:49 ago (+0/-0)

Better better mo metter me my mo metter. better.

[ - ] bosunmoon 1 point 9 monthsAug 28, 2023 17:25:00 ago (+1/-0)

Be better banana phannah fo fettah fee phy fo fetter
Banmanba
nigger.

[ - ] TwistedC [op] 0 points 9 monthsAug 28, 2023 17:34:46 ago (+0/-0)

Touche

[ - ] goatfugee12 2 points 9 monthsAug 28, 2023 16:10:01 ago (+2/-0)

faaaaaaaaaaaag, do a flip

[ - ] TwistedC [op] 3 points 9 monthsAug 28, 2023 16:13:51 ago (+3/-0)

Your comment oozes with intelligence I'm sure you have more culture and life experience then I do. Double backflip for you.

[ - ] goatfugee12 1 point 9 monthsAug 28, 2023 16:20:38 ago (+2/-1)

you managed to come off as an even bigger fag, holy shit.

[ - ] TwistedC [op] 2 points 9 monthsAug 28, 2023 17:17:41 ago (+2/-0)

I try.

[ - ] Panic 0 points 9 monthsAug 28, 2023 21:53:39 ago (+0/-0)

A lady from Australia
Painted her arse as a dahlia
All the colors were bright
And the artwork alright
The aroma alas was a falia

[ - ] anrach 0 points 9 monthsAug 28, 2023 18:05:39 ago (+0/-0)

CUT MY LIFE INTO PIECES
THIS IS MY LAST RESORT
SUFFOCATION
NO BREATHING
DON'T GIVE A FUCK
IF I CUT MY ARM BLEEDING

[ - ] con77 0 points 9 monthsAug 28, 2023 17:28:08 ago (+0/-0)

"blue steel flashing
hot lead flying
I wonder what they feel like
when they're dying"

Molly Hatchet 1978?

[ - ] TwistedC [op] 2 points 9 monthsAug 28, 2023 17:38:15 ago (+2/-0)

Their brands were still on fire
And their hooves were made of steel

Their horns were black and shiny
And their hot breath he could feel

A bolt of fear went through him
As they thundered through the sky

For he saw the riders coming hard
And he heard their mournful cry

Johnny Cash

[ - ] deleted 2 points 9 monthsAug 28, 2023 19:09:07 ago (+2/-0)

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