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Another quick broken heart poem

submitted by Rowdybme to PoetryForBrokenHearts 10 monthsJun 29, 2023 20:30:37 ago (+9/-0)     (PoetryForBrokenHearts)

Crumbled under the weight of hate and spite
He tried with all of his weight and might
to turn his bruised and battered cheek away
Always such a dangerous game to play
when you do not mean any of the hate you say
Trying to stop this game and everything stays the same but pain makes you relapse
Now. When the world is about to collapse..
when you had everything you wanted sitting in your lap
Then you hear the echos that remain
Knowing your life will never be the same.


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[ - ] HonkyMcNiggerSpic 3 points 10 monthsJun 29, 2023 20:44:59 ago (+3/-0)

Nice. I should write a poem.

You goddamn fucking whore, your head split with a board. stank in the ground if you fucking must, gust wind, gust. whore

[ - ] Rowdybme [op] 1 point 10 monthsJun 29, 2023 22:02:26 ago (+1/-0)

That's good. It inspired me to make an angry one too

[ - ] Cantaloupe 1 point 10 monthsJun 29, 2023 23:51:50 ago (+1/-0)

It needs to read in this voice

https://youtu.be/vU8eL2CjzHw

[ - ] Rowdybme [op] 0 points 10 monthsJun 30, 2023 00:41:57 ago (+0/-0)

Actually very close. To how I just read it to someone.

[ - ] deleted 0 points 10 monthsJun 30, 2023 07:03:48 ago (+0/-0)

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