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a song of mine, victory procession. sounds like crap or no?

submitted by oppressed to 1488Music 10 monthsJun 22, 2023 18:28:06 ago (+4/-1)     (soundcloud.com)

https://soundcloud.com/best-western-motel-musings/victory-procession-with-dj-taglines

i want to make white nationalist music some day with a notable singer. i have some songs ready for vocals. what do you folks think of my music?

also, here are lyrics to a different song i wrote just for your examination:

While The White Race Lay Dying lyrics

Our nations are in a cultural rot
in our TV's our minds are caught
gotta demand something much better
gotta unhand our minds from the gutter

while the white race lay dying
you're keeping up with the Kardashians
you worship negros in football
you pay the Fed beast your taxation

you saturate in the brainwashing
turn a blind eye to the racemixing
your DNA is already polluted
leaving you in a state of confusion

while the white race lay dying
you're watching Fox jewish bootlicking
keeping it real with the latest hip hop
seeing who wins on dancing with the stars

it's a sick sick sight when we won't fight
you have no right to roll over and die

there's no way you can justify
your callous sendentary life
non-whites laugh that your race is destroyed
and all conflict you carefully avoid

while the white race lay dying
you're concerned about anything else
watching the latest pop sensation
catching up on celeb gossip


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if anyone wants to join talents and create music, let me know. i am friendly and easy to work with. peace


3 comments block


[ - ] SomethingClever 0 points 10 monthsJun 22, 2023 18:56:32 ago (+0/-0)

It's okay. Sounds too much like old video game music. When it comes to fashwave, I like OBNX.

[ - ] ParnellsUprising 0 points 10 monthsJun 22, 2023 19:04:06 ago (+0/-0)

Yeah, I would try and take some inspiration from Roger Waters and his Radio KAOS DJ overlay bullshit for the voice in the background as well. Just a thought.

[ - ] oppressed [op] 0 points 10 monthsJun 23, 2023 05:06:26 ago (+0/-0)

can you elaborate on what you mean by that? thanks