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I wrote this short screenplay

submitted by PeBeFri to whatever 1 yearApr 28, 2023 21:32:06 ago (+5/-0)     (medium.com)

https://medium.com/@uawatts/v-o-24af2c881b19



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[ - ] Nasturtium 1 point 1 yearApr 28, 2023 22:15:43 ago (+1/-0)

Well written.. Poor Jake!

[ - ] clymer 0 points 1 yearApr 29, 2023 05:33:32 ago (+0/-0)

pretty good! I started a prepper-fiction read during the fall / winter of 21, after I left my job when they mandated the jab. I was working a new gig at 1/2 of what I was making before, but it was easy shit.

https://clymer.substack.com/

[ - ] Cantaloupe 0 points 1 yearApr 29, 2023 01:56:36 ago (+0/-0)

Fun read

At first it seems kind of dramatic, mysterious - fun wondering where it's going; good read, has suspension of disbelief, one is drawn in to the story

At theater major part, it turns comical

At the end pretty funny

[ - ] Artificial_Intelligentile 0 points 1 yearApr 29, 2023 01:00:36 ago (+0/-0)

i think some people might like it, although it feels like a bit of a long windup for the one joke in the end.