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"The student surpasses the master" (from last years archives)

submitted by Smedleys_Butler to TheosOpiumDen 7 monthsOct 30, 2024 07:19:01 ago (+4/-0)     (TheosOpiumDen)

It's a short ways to go now
Try to breathe easy
I'm praying too
I didn't want it to come to this
I loved you like a brother
You know I'm thankful for all you taught me
The best an apprentice could ask for
Tried to ignore my suspicions for too long
Despite your good heart
You can't help your at times shifty
Ego-driven crypto tendencies
You've gone too far this time

It's a short ways to go now
We're not tunneling under sidewalks this time
We're not in Kansas anymore
The birds are solemnly silent in the trees
And the trees will not be clapping their hands

It's a short ways to go now
May God have mercy on our souls


8 comments block


[ - ] SumerBreeze 2 points 7 monthsOct 30, 2024 08:14:58 ago (+2/-0)

Sounds like the student dropped out and decided to do drugs instead

[ - ] Smedleys_Butler [op] 0 points 7 monthsOct 30, 2024 08:26:33 ago (+0/-0)*

In some ways at a short view. This one was for a work partner in the pool construction industry.

Why do you have such a hard on for me anyway?

My work embraces the simple and complex, and yes I try to make boring things exciting, but I've also dealt in dangerous and extremely sensitive spiritual matters (if that is what the audience would like to make it that is). Everything is open to interpretation.

[ - ] Drstrangestgov 0 points 7 monthsOct 30, 2024 10:54:16 ago (+0/-0)

When construction guys go artsy-fartsy. Shut up and get back to work, homo.

[ - ] Smedleys_Butler [op] 0 points 7 monthsOct 30, 2024 15:44:37 ago (+0/-0)

I'm gonna rape you

[ - ] Drstrangestgov 0 points 7 monthsOct 30, 2024 16:21:55 ago (+0/-0)

You get that little thing anywhere near me I'll snap it off and feed it to the piggies.

[ - ] Drstrangestgov 0 points 7 monthsOct 30, 2024 17:05:18 ago (+0/-0)

You get that little thing anywhere near me I'll snap it off and feed it to the piggies.

[ - ] Smedleys_Butler [op] 0 points 7 monthsOct 31, 2024 11:47:41 ago (+0/-0)

I'm quite comfortable

[ - ] Smedleys_Butler [op] 0 points 7 monthsOct 31, 2024 11:50:41 ago (+0/-0)

I'm quite comfortable