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Hook - By Jmaes Wright

submitted by HelenHighwater to poetry 7 monthsOct 24, 2024 22:07:58 ago (+2/-0)     (poetry)

Hook
by James Wright
James Wright

I was only a young man
In those days. On that evening
The cold was so God damned
Bitter there was nothing.
Nothing. I was in trouble
With a woman, and there was nothing
There but me and dead snow.

I stood on the street corner
In Minneapolis, lashed
This way and that.
Wind rose from some pit,
Hunting me.
Another bus to Saint Paul
Would arrive in three hours,
If I was lucky.

Then the young Sioux
Loomed beside me, his scars
Were just my age.

Ain't got no bus here
A long time, he said.
You got enough money
To get home on?

What did they do
To your hand? I answered.
He raised up his hook into the terrible starlight
And slashed the wind.

Oh, that? he said.
I had a bad time with a woman. Here,
You take this.

Did you ever feel a man hold
Sixty-five cents
In a hook,
And place it
Gently
In your freezing hand?

I took it.
It wasn't the money I needed.
But I took it.


6 comments block


[ - ] Smedleys_Butler 1 point 7 monthsOct 24, 2024 22:33:38 ago (+1/-0)

Good stuff

[ - ] HelenHighwater [op] 0 points 7 monthsOct 24, 2024 22:35:05 ago (+0/-0)

He's in my top five. Small doses.

[ - ] HelenHighwater [op] 0 points 7 monthsOct 24, 2024 22:44:50 ago (+0/-0)

So, I mean...In my past I could've written a million papers on this. Transcendence of man and the breaking down of barriers. If anything it is about loneliness.

Here is a man, freezing, homeless, destitute.

He meets a Sioux. Same age,

Wants nothing to do with him.

Realizes his plight is his alone.

[ - ] paul_neri 0 points 7 monthsOct 25, 2024 04:15:36 ago (+0/-0)

Thanks for the explanation. I'll re-read it...slowly.

[ - ] paul_neri 0 points 7 monthsOct 25, 2024 04:17:17 ago (+0/-0)

I think that man was @Kozel

[ - ] paul_neri 0 points 7 monthsOct 25, 2024 04:17:55 ago (+0/-0)

But does that sort of compassion happen IRL? I doubt it.