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The Tower and the Fall

submitted by TheodoreKent to TheosOpiumDen 1.6 yearsOct 23, 2023 22:37:35 ago (+9/-3)     (TheosOpiumDen)

That vile Demiurge who Calls himself God, drowned all of my Forefathers,
A wicked being, powerful and potent, He created the physical universe,
Without election, or consent,
I never asked to be,
Yet here I am.

He, and He Alone decided that we will Exist.
And he gave us Eden, a Perfect Place.
And he decided to create a Serpent.
And he decided to create Eve.
And he decided that we should fall from Grace.

He gave us Freedom of Will,
And when we used that Freedom,
He Admonished us for our Choices.

We Failed him,
Before He had even given us Commandments.

Our Men Created Cities,
They Congregated, And Did what They felt was right,
Without instruction from the Lord,

And what they did thereafter,
However Sinful it was,
They did not live in the time of Christ,
Or Abraham,

How could they know?

But the Rains came.
And the Rains would not stop.

For Forty Days, the Floods Came.
Washing Away All that Did not submit to the God That Sent them.

Somehow, a Single Man and his Family were Chosen by this God to survive the Flood,

Antediluvian, that's what they called those times,
When God chose to call us all wicked,
Despite having created us himself.
How was it for us, who were created in the Image of God, to Survive,

And realize that God Himself was Suicidal?

That he sought to wipe his own Image off of the face of the Earth?
Never Again.

That is why I, Nimrod, in Babylon
Began the construction of a Tower Higher than any before,
This Tower would be higher than any flood that God could send, A promise to us,
A Promise to our Freedom from his Wrath.
All of Humanity was united, fearing the Demiurge would strike again,

So we Built,
and we Built Together,
Unified.

The stones were heavy.
The slope was steep.
And everything was against us.

But the cost, the cost of not doing it...
The cost of not doing it would be everything...

Up and up and Up again,
It was towering through the clouds.
We were almost certain to reach Heaven,
And claim ourselves as worthy,

Until that Wicked, and Vengeful God,
With all of his Power,
and All of his Might,
And all of his Jealousy,
Decided that we were not allowed into Heaven.
A perfect place,
A peaceful home,
forbidden to us by the Heavenly Father.

He smashed our Tower,
And confused our Language,
So we would never be one people, together,
But forgotten brothers, fighting, forever.

And he let us know,
Once and for all,
We will never be good enough for Him.


https://open.substack.com/pub/theodorekentwallace/p/the-tower?r=1vlklp&utm_campaign=post&utm_medium=web


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[ - ] Fascinus 2 points 1.6 yearsOct 23, 2023 22:43:36 ago (+2/-0)

We will never be good enough for Him.

It may not seem so and even this may have been an act of mercy, so that we might not somehow delude ourselves into imagining our journey being complete.

[ - ] TheodoreKent [op] 1 point 1.6 yearsOct 23, 2023 22:45:11 ago (+1/-0)

How do you mean?

[ - ] Fascinus 3 points 1.6 yearsOct 23, 2023 22:46:52 ago (+3/-0)

So that we never stop striving, lest we mistake some preset destination for the journey toward the divine itself.

[ - ] TheOriginal1Icemonkey 2 points 1.6 yearsOct 23, 2023 22:40:23 ago (+2/-0)

Damn dude.

[ - ] TheodoreKent [op] 1 point 1.6 yearsOct 23, 2023 22:43:03 ago (+1/-0)

How's life?

[ - ] TheOriginal1Icemonkey 1 point 1.6 yearsOct 24, 2023 00:08:38 ago (+1/-0)

Not bad. I mean, I could complain, I guess, but no one would listen, so I just chill and don’t ask “why” about much. Wouldn’t matter if I did.

[ - ] PrincessRobotBubblegum 1 point 1.6 yearsOct 24, 2023 00:01:48 ago (+1/-0)

We regret nothing!

Lilith came before Adam with Eve!

Fuck Agrimas & Tubalcain back across the plains of Enoch, amid the fluttering of feathers and tinkling of scattered armaments among the pustulant filth of erst flaming anon festering carcasses of fallen slaughtered Nephilim!

Whoa! Flashbacks!

[ - ] TheodoreKent [op] 0 points 1.6 yearsOct 24, 2023 00:16:58 ago (+0/-0)

Fuck Agrimas & Tubalcain back across the plains of Enoch

pls explain?

[ - ] Smedleys_Butler 0 points 1.6 yearsOct 24, 2023 08:51:33 ago (+0/-0)

Biblical acid flashbacks are the worst

[ - ] Thought_Criminal 1 point 1.6 yearsOct 23, 2023 23:56:07 ago (+1/-0)

Some fine grist for a late Oktober eve. Bless you.

So Hisimage, self-loathing God?

[ - ] TheodoreKent [op] 1 point 1.6 yearsOct 24, 2023 00:16:10 ago (+1/-0)

The "God" of the Old Testament made man in his own image, and then sought to scour that image from the Earth when he found a blemish...

Have you ever watched a bipolar drunk break a mirror in the bathroom?

[ - ] Spaceman84 1 point 1.6 yearsOct 23, 2023 23:32:26 ago (+1/-0)

Fairly accurate though the demiurge thrives on torment and suffering. There is no good enough. Thats why sadistic kikes are chosen.

[ - ] TheodoreKent [op] 0 points 1.6 yearsOct 23, 2023 23:39:51 ago (+0/-0)

The Jew offers you the pleasures of the universe before swindling you out of your morality, dignity, and possessions.

[ - ] Smedleys_Butler 1 point 1.6 yearsOct 24, 2023 08:34:47 ago (+1/-0)

That's how khazar merchants operated. Welcome foreign traders. Wine and dine, give them whores, etc. Then kill them in the night and assume their identity to complete the transaction

[ - ] deleted 1 point 1.6 yearsOct 23, 2023 23:02:29 ago (+1/-0)

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[ - ] TheodoreKent [op] 1 point 1.6 yearsOct 23, 2023 23:28:05 ago (+1/-0)

Interesting aspect